Abducted Alchemist p28

I volunteered to do a couple of pages for The-DA-Ranger-Group s Abducted Alchemist comic project. salamangkiro gave me pages 28 and 29 to draw up. This is page 28. I darkened the line art and I wish I could do more detail in the background but I'm running out of time
I did however fix Mustang's nose in the bottom panel because it was too high, he had a huge top lip and it kinda made him look like he was part monkey.

More info/ other pages-
the-da-ranger-group.deviantart…

Line art without text-
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line art with text-
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Characters are from FMA